People’s lives are now surrounded by advertisement. This affects what people consider important and has a negative impact on people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
We are now living in a society bombarded by the appearance of advertisements and many people consider this may cause detrimental effects on our lives. While I do agree that advertising can have negative impacts on some aspects, they also play a significant role in enhancing our living standards.
In the one hand, advertisements can deceived us into purchasing things that aren't really essential to catch up with the latest trend. For example, people queue up in front of Apple chain stores to buy new iPhone released every year although their current smartphones still function smoothly , leading to people wasting their own money on unimportant things to satisfy their own demands without seriously taking their needs into considerations. Furthermore, advertisements can also cause distractions and irritations. some adverts are shown and posted continuous ly on the TV and social media making people feel irritated and annoyed and even fear whenever adverts pop up.
In the other hand, advertisements also contribute significantly to the well-being of the society and human-beings. Firstly, by the emergence of advertisements, customers are always kept informed about ranges of products therefore provides customers more choices thus increases overall their living standards. Moreover, advertisements create more job opportunities for the unemployed. To make adverts widespread, companies have to construct advertising agencies therefore employ more workers. For instance, in nations which have dense population such as Vietnam, constructing and running advertising agencies has create employment for thousands of people and solve the thorny issue of unemployment.
In conclusion, even though the appearance of adverts can bring about negative effects in some aspects, I believe that the development of advertisements can increase the average living standards of humans.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, really, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72759856631 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20955206996 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620071684588 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3153483236 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.166666667 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0833333333 7.06120827912 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22436573494 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768732582541 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670777415476 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145286808387 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0926866354793 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.25 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.