People say total lockdown need to continue in Hanoi and Vietnam to fight Coronavirus. Others think that it is time for easing restrictions for economic recovery. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The world is living in a very difficult and unprecedented situation caused by Coronavirus. Among many solutions taken to flatten the contagious curve, social distancing has been popular in many countries. How to balance between full lockdown for health protection and partial restrictions for social and economic activities has been a heated debate. My essay below dicusses both arguements and forms my point of view.
On the one hand, social distancing has been effective in flattening the curve in many countries. Wuhan is the first city in the world to go into lockdown due to the Coronavirus. Chinese government ban worked well in isolating patients for treatment, limiting virus spread out, and stoping importation of new cases from outside. The whole province of Hubei, including its capital city is slowly returning to something that might be described as normal after monhts of fear and anxiety. The case of Wuhan and China broadly has been followed my most of big cities and countries across continents. Hanoi, after a steady increase of positive cases in March has been locked down since early April by a Directive from the Prime Minister. Hanoians can only go out for essential activities such as health care or buying foods and meeting of more than 10 people is not allowed. Moreover, municial police has right to fine people who dont wear face masks or can not justify their reasons of going outside. The total number of positive patients is within the control of authorities. We can add Paris, London, New York, Sydney onto the already long list of cities where control measures are being applied.
On the other hand, lockdown has been causing many difficulties for people's lives. Unemployment and partly employment, have been very popular. In Hanoi for example, being considered as non-essential, hotel, restaurant, gym station, non-food shops, public transport have been all closed for the last two weeks, which resulted in job loss, no or reduced income of their workers. People in informal sectors, who can be a street vendors, no-contract construction workers, motobike taxi drivers, are the most affected sinece they are not protected by a social program or network.Total ban of travel and transport from province to province and even from coutry to country has totally broken the supply chains of many sectors. No inputs for production and no way to export their goods pushed companies closer to bankrupcy. In addition, social researchers reported anecdotal evidence of social issues caused by long time school closure for children, limited social interaction, more gender-based violence in family. Following recent movement in USA, where President Trump plans the country reopening, social researchers, economists, business sectors, Key Opinion Leaders on social networks are advocating for easing administrative measures in big cities of Hanoi, Hochiminh City, Da Nang. Doctors however still advise that social distancing, handwashing continue to be key measures to deal with the virus. I share the view that supports partial restriction for high-risk sectors and areas with gradual reopening in other places.
In conclusion, coronavirus is changing the world we are living in today. Measures by Government and individuals to deal with the disaster need to balance people's health safety and economic recovery.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, so, still, well, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 41.998997996 186% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2813.0 1615.20841683 174% => OK
No of words: 529.0 315.596192385 168% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31758034026 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79583152331 4.20363070211 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77035215742 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 311.0 176.041082164 177% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587901701323 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 861.3 506.74238477 170% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.1784504265 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.52 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.16 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213891172798 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543895656798 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522326603441 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125767839705 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431249818551 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 175.0 78.4519038076 223% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.