People should buy products from others countries. What is your opinion?
Nowadays, people all over the world prefer buying products from others countries. For example, if a Japanese person wants to buy rice, he or she should go to Thailand ingredients' website, then buy it because Thailand was famous for their rice. There are so many advantages from buying goods from that way because individuals just choose which one is the best for them.
Firstly, in my opinion, buying worldwide product does not only no hurt to the economy, but it also makes the economy in many countries grow. Because many countries buy rice from Thai and Vietnam, the economy in both of these countries grows significantly. Next, I think buyers worldwide can choose which products are best for them. For example, Australia is famous for their apples, but China is not, so people choose Australian apple. The next benefit is this way of buying goods will be healthy for public's health because there is no chemical poisoness in right products, so the usage can be more safety.
Buying the same goods anywhere in the world haves a huge range of benefit that I listed in the top paragraph but when people do this way of shopping, they need to be alert because of many unrealistic products. For example, people can have falsely chosen like: apple from China, but the note on each apple was Australian apples, and there are so much poisoness in that type of fruit.
In conclusion, there are a wide range of benefits in buying products in other countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 254, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to like'
Suggestion: to like
...example, people can have falsely chosen like: apple from China, but the note on each...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, then, for example, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1202.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76984126984 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42485970118 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547619047619 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4208395667 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.272727273 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277292559505 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126905818534 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11082046009 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203725540449 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0888345321585 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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