People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new
country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people believe when making a transition to settling in a new country, they should practice the country’s traditions. I completely agree with this.
There are many good reasons to follow and adapt the customs as a new immigrant. Firstly, when learned the traditions, it will be easier to blend into the society. For example, an international student transfers to a school in United States, where the school is all about football. If the student does not know anything about football, it will be very difficult for the student to communicate with others attending the same school or blend into the American spirit.
Secondly, a foreigner that does not adapt to the new environment or does the opposite action might end up doing something illegal. For instance in Singapore, people don’t chew gum and it is going against the law if an immigrant does it. However, there is a good side in adapting to a new culture; one of them is to be able to gain knowledge. Entrepreneurs who learned the traditions in a new country are more likely to be successful. Another advantage of learning new traditions is you will be more likely to be welcome by the community. For example of my sister dated a foreigner 2 years ago. The first day, he came to meet and have lunch my parents; he was judged right away when he did not wait for the elders to eat before he can have his first bite.
In conclusion, I would argue it is essential for foreigners to learn new customs when moved to a new country in order to be success and enjoy a good quality experiences in the new place.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... when making a transition to settling in a new country, they should practice the ...
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... to be success and enjoy a good quality experiences in the new place.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65357142857 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74447264553 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564285714286 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1787929806 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0714285714 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117049627022 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432259565315 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396635495418 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0810750403984 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476293827078 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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