People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, more and more people tend to emigrate to other countries for making their lives better. There is an argument that immigrants’ local customs and traditions should be change to help them harmonize with native people. In my opinion, I totally agree with this view.
There are some reasons why people had better to follow new customs and traditions when they settle down in other countries. Firstly, if immigrants do not willing to gain knowledge about new country’s culture, they could do something wrong, even illegal in host environment, which is lead to a creation of culture barrier with local people. As the result, they will be isolated in society and have a bad feeling during all time they live in this nation. For example, beef is one of the most well-known foods in many countries, but with Indian, they believe cows are sacred animals and people who eat cows are sinners and would have a strong punishment with discriminations of most residents around them.
In addition, people living in different countries also have different ways to treat others, especially on work. To be more detail, in Western culture, if employees make some mistakes, the manager just gives a clever complaint and encourages them to solve those problems. In contrast, Eastern person likes to scold and uses some negative comments to them since he thinks that this is the best way to make someone become better. Therefore, if individuals know how they will be dealt by local people in this country, they could not be shocked and would feel more comfortable.
In conclusion, I still believe that immigrants should respect and observe some customs and traditions in the host country to live well in new environment.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 181, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'changed'?
Suggestion: changed
... local customs and traditions should be change to help them harmonize with native peop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, still, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01748251748 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69223730723 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601398601399 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3924848592 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.583333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214584539944 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818064076417 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699582279237 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139978147811 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359062249387 0.056905535591 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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