Scientists say that in the future humanity will speak the same language. Do you think this is a positive or negative social development?

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Scientists say that in the future humanity will speak the same language. Do you think this is a positive or negative social development?

Scientists suggest that in the near future, the linguistic barriers would be destroyed because people just use one language over the world. While some people think that it is a negative development, I strongly believe that benefits could outweigh drawbacks.
On the one hand, it is no doubt that speaking only one language has some disadvantages. Firstly, the rich cultural diversity which makes our life more interesting would be lost. Language is a vital connection with cultural identity and people speaking it, so if languages disappear, the young will underestimate the value of their culture and traditions. Secondly, before finding out the official language is suitable to speak, the argument happens among developed countries because no one wants their language to be disappeared. Therefore, it leads to the serious problems such as violence or world war.
On the other hand, breaking down the linguistic barriers brings more benefits than drawbacks. By using the same language, the development of the economy, tourism, education could be boosted thanks to the facilitation of international communication. Moreover, using only one language is a bridge with different cultures and countries. The scientists and students can research and gain knowledge more easily and conveniently since all materials over the world are written in one language. For example, nowadays, some novels and poetries have rhetoric and some sentences that when translated into other languages would be not true and makes this text is devalued.
In conclusion, for the reasons mentioned above, although using one language has some disadvantage in the short term, but in the long term, it is necessary and has a large positive effect on the development of the world.

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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37090909091 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91196221935 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592727272727 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.987491498 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.615384615 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6923076923 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116737406532 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399883753079 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337579865608 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0703842958339 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0124461479034 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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