People tend to work longer hours nowadays. Working long hours has a negative effect on themselves, their families and society, so working hours should be restricted. Do you agree or disagree?
Working longer hours is getting more common in today’s society. Yet, there is empirical evidence demonstrating that this trend not only brings negative impacts on the workers themselves but also on their families and the company as a whole. Therefore, I totally agree with the idea of limiting working hours.
First and foremost, being exerted pressure of the huge amount of tasks and long hours concentrating on work, the possibility remains that there is such extensive damage in physical condition and mental health, such as fatigue and obesity. Moreover, spending more time on work is probably at the expense of personal life. Busy working schedules prevent people from taking frequent family trips or even just having meals together. Relationships among members are greatly weakened if they cannot make time for each other. As a result, people may become socially isolated, thereby suffering from stress and depression.
Not only bringing negative impacts on employees, but working overtime might also probably cause severe damage to an organization. The primary reason is that employees tend to be less productive. When people feel exhausted, they tend to make more errors at work than they used to and they have to spend much more on trying to catch up on those neglected tasks. Moreover, it would lead to higher absenteeism and turnover, which then forces employers to spend much more on recruiting and training new employees. Therefore, it would remain a decline in the efficiency of a company.
In conclusion, long work hours are often counterproductive. Therefore, I would be supportive of the position to restrict the working hours of employees.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28571428571 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8274975677 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.9288382489 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7333333333 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338083968056 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112946154184 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0989436313645 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233711506967 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0950948587776 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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