Some people think that killing animals for food is cruel, but other claim that animals are a necessary part of diet. What’s your opinion?
The question of whether it is right to eat animal flesh is among the most prominent topics in food ethics. Although it has been condemned as cruelty to animals, a counter-argument is that meat is the necessity for people's health and well-being. To the best of my knowledge, meat is a regular part of the diet and eating meat is not a problem as long as we exploit them in a proportionate way.
First and foremost, meat makes up a considerable portion of a typical diet. While there are many sources of protein, meat is a great source of complete protein, containing all the amino acids our bodies needs, including the ones our bodies can’t produce. Insufficient intake of those nutrients will produce negative health outcomes, such as poor growth. Meat helps keep blood sugar levels stable due to its fat and high protein content. With stable blood sugar, you’re less likely to drool for fattening snacks and sweets between meals.
Furthermore, while some vegetarians feel that it is unethical to eat meat, I believe that humans eating meat are a part of the circle of life. Animals eat other animals to survive. However, people always seem to forget that humans are also animals. If the entire world became vegan, cows, chickens, sheep, and pigs would not survive long in wild. in other words, We provide them life and they give life to us. It’s a mutually beneficial relationship. Therefore, eating meat is not only ethical, but it is also necessary.
In conclusion, while eating meat is normal, natural and necessary, the human must avoid over the killing of animals and the killing of rare or endangered species to retain the beauty of our nature.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: Whether; The question whether
The question of whether it is right to eat animal flesh is amon...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a proportionate way" with adverb for "proportionate"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ot a problem as long as we exploit them in a proportionate way. First and foremost, meat makes up ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...roportionate way. First and foremost, meat makes up a considerable portion of ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...nd pigs would not survive long in wild. in other words, We provide them life and t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88771929825 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66265626415 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617543859649 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.3754734824 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0625 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8125 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174613439695 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583965650436 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671756704255 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105889488445 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351923173176 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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