People Who Read For Pleasure Develop Their Imagination More And Acquire Better Language Skills Compared To People Who Prefer Watching Television Agree Disagree

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People Who Read For Pleasure Develop Their Imagination More And Acquire Better Language Skills Compared To People Who Prefer Watching Television ?Agree/Disagree

In this era, people are acquiring multitudinous alternative to utilise of their free time. Many populace perceive that, fond of reading it would delight, develop their imagination further and acquire better linguistics skills compared to individuals who prefer watching television . I partially concur with the statement.

To embark inculcation of reading practice has been playing quintessential role in cognizance of the language and study because today's reader can be leader of tomorrow . There are multitudes of benefits to read for improving imagination and becoming Multi linguistic : having largest range of lexical resource; perfection in Grammar ;cognition about a particular language and readers are having the huge amount of vocabularies . For an example, in India where, people are emphasizing upon reading and improving all types of knowledge because there are lot of realty shows where, reader can show their reading skills by giving answer of question and chances to become a billionaires , Millionaires .

However, technology has been booming exponentially due to that, there are plethora of TV shows ,where people would joy and source of learning dissimilar languages . Nowadays, Televisions - it is the best way of getting entertainment with keep them away from some psychology issue likewise stress, burden and anxiety . Also for some people , watching TV is best path for studying new language and it is stress busters and mood booster. The epitome of this is, Canada where, education sector is different vis- a' - vis to other Nation, there , mentors are teaching Students by means of video and short film which are based on carriculm because human mind is easily catch up graphics information also high chances to be Pundit in particular fields .

To conclude, both are essential for enjoyment and learning dissimilar languages ,but it is depending upon people minds and their interests.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, likewise, so, in particular

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52040816327 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92504515985 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639455782313 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.0150812231 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.545454545 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7272727273 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 53.0 5.01903807615 1056% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330678712907 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112059359878 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105927540216 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200920228727 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112481137164 0.056905535591 198% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.