People's aim to achieve the balance between personal and professional life, but few are able to achieve it. What are the reason for this. How to overcome this problem.
With the rise in modernization, a man has transformed his life tremendously. Nevertheless, there are some issues which remain irrevocable and as complex as ever. For instance, the given topic asserts that which way people can make balance in their life; personal and professional? In this eassy, I will examine the possible reason for this trend and suggest some of the practical policies that individual could implement to curb this problem.
The first step is to understand why it is happening? Broadly speaking, there are some reason for this. The first and foremost is contemporary social environment. However, this era is competitive era and everyone give the tough competition in workplace that's why they are busy in their work and do not have time to spend with their family. Whereas, nowadays education put burden on the students that's reason student do not have time to play outdoor activities. Moreover, nowadays people desires are increase day by day, their behaviour like consumerism and they demand more material for improving their lifestyle that's why they give more preferences to their work.
There is almost certainly no one solution to this problem given the complexity of its cause. However, one option has to be to make general public aware of desires and establish correct values for the money, family and either materialistic things. It would also be possible government should impose strict laws for limiting the working hours.
In conclusion, I tend to believe that government should reduce the working hours in workplace which will play crucial role in everyone's life for making balance between personal and professional life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, whereas, as to, broadly speaking, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24436090226 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76010777387 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601503759398 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4756233174 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6428571429 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238789010705 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079240728788 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810553125782 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15059127592 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684074752856 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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