The plan below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
A couple of maps offer how the layout of a sport centre in university change amazingly in the future after replicating.
Overall, the most significant change will be the presence of more new places leading to a sport layout. By contrast, two outdoor courts will not work in the future being demolished.
Looking at the map for more details, while do 3 areas called a 25m pool, a seating and a changing room keep up, there has more new wonderfully places. To the East of the 25m pool, next to the seating, a hall for sport activities will be developed. In addition, there will have 2 studios for students desiring to dance. Furthermore, a future gym room will be twice as large as the old one.
Especially, what makes a future centre different from old one is both cafe and sports shop in the right and left turn respectively when you immediately enter the centre. Apart from maintaining an old changing room, the centre will have 2 more same places for students. Finally, a new pool will be opened in leisure time that is bigger than another. It will be took place in the left side to the West of the 25m pool.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, if, look, while, apart from, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 24.0651302605 12% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 917.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 203.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51724137931 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52708879478 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5960591133 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4320013373 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3636363636 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137016142858 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587511949127 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441125204859 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105342042698 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478254086763 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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