Planting trees is important is very important for the environment Some people says trees should be planted in vacant areas of cities and towns while others says housing facilities should be build instead Do you agree or disagree

Essay topics:

Planting trees is important is very important for the environment. Some people says trees should be planted in vacant areas of cities and towns, while others says housing facilities should be build instead. Do you agree or disagree?

Growing more trees and plants is essential to keep the atmosphere free from pollution and cool. It has been considered by some people that unoccupied land in cities and towns should be covered by planting trees whereas, others believe that accommodation amenities should be developed on free space. In my opinion, I agree with the former statement.

There are many reasons which prove that growing trees is beneficial than building houses. One of then is that nowadays, air pollution is the major issue faced by multiple nations and no doubt, because of the availability of facilities, for instance, schools, universities, shopping malls, super markets and hospitals, these places are overpopulated and as a result, roads are highly congested. The vehicles on the roads emit CO2 which is one of the major contributor in depleting the air. Hence, trees ought to be planted as they absorb CO2 and release O2 into the atmosphere making the air clean and purified.

Other reason is that global warming is the another hurdle which is caused due to rise in earth's surface which results in melting the polar ice-caps which in turn raising the sea level causing floods and storms. Only way to curb this issue is decreasing the earth's temperature which can be done by tress as they help in cooling the surrounding due to its shade and perspiration of water. Finally, there are some species of micro-organism and birds which have their habitat only on trees and their number is getting reduced due to the destruction of plants and trees causes ecological imbalance.

To conclude, planting trees to conserve the environment and make it fit for living is a better idea as compared to building houses because problem of providing shelter to growing population can be solved by constructing skyscrapers which provide accommodation to numerous of people.

Votes
Average: 8.3 (27 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 258, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'earths'' or 'earth's'?
Suggestion: earths'; earth's
...ay to curb this issue is decreasing the earths temperature which can be done by tress ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, hence, if, so, then, whereas, for instance, no doubt, as a result, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08223684211 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77111752998 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588815789474 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.2039943896 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.454545455 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6363636364 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239272384599 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890523328726 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861177389395 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153101342455 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0853182983755 0.056905535591 150% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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