Pollution and other environment problems are resulting from a country’s developing and becoming richer. Some think this cannot be avoided. To what extent do you agree of disagree.
One of the most worrying trends in an ever-changing world, appears to be toward environment destructing with the economic development. This trend, as it grow, has attracted attention, in view of the fact that it may influence human’s life. However, I do not agree with the opinion that it cannot be prevented.
Firstly, it is true that environmental problems would not emerge if a country does not expand economy. With the economic advances, manufacturing plays a vital role in nation’s prosperity, for example, cutting off trees to build up more skyscrapers. Furthermore, this behavior which is total less environment-friendly is the approach we have to experience, because we need more space for people to live, and it means more workforces. Moreover, it will degrade our environment definitely.
Opponent, by contrast, environmental decline is more serious and prominent in poor countries. The particularly important reason why they did bad in environmental protection is the people and government less concentrate on it. The deprived country’s citizens are not challenged at a high enough level do not consider what they should do in protecting environment can pay less attention in it. They give priority to address their basic needs, such as foods, drinks, taking care of their babies and so on.
Another explanation is that environmental questions are not an inevitable result of economic progress. Animals, plants, natural resources will be initial appearance if we take some green measures to maintain our home. For instance, the public should take their responsibility to publish some effective and quality laws to forbid people’s anti eco-friendly behaviors. When individual use less disposal products, the energy and material will as much as possibly to be conserved, contribute extraordinarily to sustainable development.
In conclusion, there is a link with economic development and envi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...agree with the opinion that it cannot be prevented. Firstly, it is true that env...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52881355932 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39977524309 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650847457627 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3672128175 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.9375 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4375 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178668573568 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053106499832 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477064801165 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877167204984 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342995949682 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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