Pollution and other environmental damages are caused by a country developing and becoming richer. This problem cannot be avoided. ( To what extent do you agree)
these days, the developement gose along with environment">environmental issues such as pollution, global warming, radiation leaking. it is clear that we should take action seriously and immediately to avoid these problems and protect our earth. In this essay, i will discuss further about how we have to eleminate environment">environmental damages.
globle warming is not a strange issues now a days, and its results ice-melting lead to bad flood worldwide. many animals are losting their live environment and standing before disappeared threat. we are hurting the earth to get economic growth. one day, we will realise that money can not buy a fresh atmosphere and any food.
the cold war between countries rises a lot of risk to our life, one of the most dangerous weapon is nuclear. Its destroy level can wat all lives over the world. although there is a peaceful purpose of using nuclear like producing eletronic power, but when disasters happend like earquake or exploition making radiation leaking, it will destroy all the live entities from trees to animals and humans.
In conclusion, people is not the owner of the earth, so we have to live peaceful along with it. All countries and goverment must be take responsible for protect and prevent globle damages. Beside that they have to form a public rule as well as punsishment to any countries or individual entites that destroy the environment.
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- Pollution and other environmental damages are caused by a country developing and becoming richer This problem cannot be avoided To what extent do you agree
- Pollution and other environmental damages are caused by a country developing and becoming richer This problem cannot be avoided To what extent do you agree 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1191.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17826086957 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.54647512642 2.80592935109 126% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647826086957 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.6045518334 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6153846154 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6923076923 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07692307692 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0832813718648 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0281984148754 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317834571922 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0498394570372 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437923716528 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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