Pollution and other environmental problems are resulting from a country’s developing and becoming richer. Some think this cannot be avoided. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is a big controversy surrounding pollution and other environmental problems. I partly agree with this assertion, while it seems to be true in some countries, others could be not. Therefore, I personally agree with the second part but strongly disagree with the first one and in this essay I will support my idea with some examples.
For a variety of reasons, it would be wrong that there are most countries which cause pollution and environmental problems while they are developing and becoming richer. In the information age, more and more countries apply solutions to alleviate any issues which are related to global environments. Therefore, developing countries can buy and develop these advances in their countries. Taking Thailand as an example, the governments have bought and applied various technological advances into numerous branches in their country. This can lead to a decline of pollution or other environmental pitfalls.
On the other hand, I believe that if developing countries cause a plethora of environmental issues and pollution, they would be halted. Firstly, the world is facing a series of environmental pitfalls. Therefore, all countries should encourage the adoption of intervention as soon as possible before this problem becomes more immense. Secondly, the consequences which developing countries have to face in the future are serious. Due to the fact that they caused the bad actions into the environment and they have to pay for those. For example, although India is a developed country with a high GDP per year, this country must face directly the decrease of quality of the air and a lot of wastes which are emitted day by day.
In conclusion, I would argue that there are not many countries which are developing cause pollution and environmental problems. However, I personally concur that it is true to prevent these actions which affect adversely on the environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... buy and develop these advances in their countries. Taking Thailand as an example...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2345276873 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9889361569 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530944625407 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6161428202 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.4375 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1875 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1875 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304776853591 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105595626805 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713941617906 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182789563977 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039656029284 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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