The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of
the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the
fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
working womens are now important part of country economy and development.In last twenty the position of females has changed significantly in a society.Most of the problems encountered by joung people for example crimes by small childrens mainly because of the fact that many of married females are working women and not at home to take care or responsibilities of their childrens.In this essay we will discuss the importance and usefullness of women work with strong disagreement with statment.
Although many people argued that juvinile delinquency are just because of their mother not taking care of their children.and they involved in criminal activities perhaphs no one parents is present to teach them what is wrong and right.they strenghten their opinion by recent survey conducted by hardvard university about children Pshychology that their mind cannot discriminate and evaluate the fact.the childrens wanted to do what they watch on tv or internet which leads to restructive behaviour.however,many kind of violent behaviour observe by university students and one of them kill almost twenty five student of school.
But,all these fact cannot give the reason of these activites are just because of working mothers.An educated and working women could handle their house and professional life in very effective way and on time.Perhaps,destructive attitude of youngs are mostly due to psychological and mentle problems which could be seen in any one respectless of age and home environment.An other cause of aggressive attitude is due to increasingly use of internet and not giving puroper time for outdoor activities build negative energy in them.
in this essay we discussed the causes of juvinile delinquency are not just because of mother working and neglecting their home and family with strong disagreement of statment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45422535211 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29197106569 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577464788732 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 71.0 20.2975951904 350% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 168.766110342 49.4020404114 342% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 387.25 106.682146367 363% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 71.0 20.7667163134 342% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251191931919 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141783136433 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104918176466 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141783136433 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104918176466 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.7 13.0946893788 303% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -9.05 50.2224549098 -18% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.2 11.3001002004 285% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.51 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.27 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.4 10.1190380762 300% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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