the diagram below shows steps and process of cement making and concrete making with material and process.sumerised the information by reporting main features and make comparsion where possible.
The given diagram depict the stages and instruments utilized in cement manufacturing and how end product used to form concrete for construction.The first diagram is about cement production by raw material clay and limestone through long process.But, in the other picture is related about manufacturing of concrete from twenty five percent cement and water, and gravel and sand half and quarter in amount.
Firstly, the cement fabrication process involved machines which is more complex as compare to concrete machine.first step is fine powder of limestone and clay in crusher.Second part is mixer which homogenize the material.Next material moves in rotating heater which heat the mixture and release heat and mixture.Further mixture grind once more time into cement. fully manufactured cement is then packed and distributed.
However, Concrete production is less complicated with comparison cement but number of raw material are more.concrete manufacturing machine consist of concrete mixer.Because concrete production is simpler substances like gravel fifty percent, sand twenty five percent,cement fifteen percent and water ten percent add to form perfect concrete.
In short cement manufacturing involved multiple steps and chamber machine but concrete required only mixer.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... used to form concrete for construction.The first diagram is about cement productio...
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Suggestion: But
...clay and limestone through long process.But, in the other picture is related about ...
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...ompare to concrete machine.first step is fine powder of limestone and clay in cru...
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...powder of limestone and clay in crusher.Second part is mixer which homogenize the mate...
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... is mixer which homogenize the material.Next material moves in rotating heater which...
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...he mixture and release heat and mixture.Further mixture grind once more time into cemen...
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...xture grind once more time into cement. fully manufactured cement is then packed and ...
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...oncrete manufacturing machine consist of concrete mixer.Because concrete producti...
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...ring machine consist of concrete mixer.Because concrete production is simpler substanc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, so, then, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1095.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.88709677419 4.92477711251 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16319615582 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60752688172 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 22.4926829268 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 143.056072922 43.030603864 332% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 219.0 112.824112599 194% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.2 22.9334400587 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 5.23603664747 229% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166024505435 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909413282623 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310240857233 0.0843802449381 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105276874709 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197242574217 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.9 13.2329268293 188% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 17.0 61.2550243902 28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 10.3012195122 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.47 11.4140731707 153% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.06136585366 126% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 11.4329268293 258% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.9970731707 153% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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