At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do you think that the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, in many countries youngster population is augment than older age people. The increases of population many countries having pros and cons. I pen down, youngster is the back bone for every nation.
According to the UN report in some country namely India, China, Indonesia, Australia, and Ireland, etc, from the followed countries has accounted higher percentage of youngster population. So that the territory from enemy. For example, due to high value of youngster in India and Ireland, these countries are having future revolution at IT sector.
On other hand, some of major demand create when the population increases such as financial crises, demand of job, food, habitation, and increases pollution. In spite of, students are addicted to drugs and sexual transmission disease. For instance, India today magazine survey report in the year of 2019 was about 30% are illiterate, 76% addiction in drugs, 70% job seeker. Therefor, the young generation struggle to survey day to day life from this they addicted to alcohol to remove stress, anxiety, stigma, etc.
Finally, there are more negative effect than positive effect. The government need to take prior implementation like to taboo drugs, then start rehabilitation centre, free education, providing job opportunity, strict laws, to recover mis-communication between older and young people then how youngster learn success and failure from them. Hence the younger people is important to develop the nation and culture.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
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Suggestion: augmented
... many countries youngster population is augment than older age people. The increases o...
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Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...her percentage of youngster population. So that the territory from enemy. For example, ...
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Suggestion:
... to remove stress, anxiety, stigma, etc. Finally, there are more negative effect ...
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Suggestion: Hence,
...er learn success and failure from them. Hence the younger people is important to deve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, hence, if, so, then, for example, for instance, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47826086957 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81629071364 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.673913043478 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 64.4245350007 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9230769231 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6923076923 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110962961755 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0366155199355 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425883308986 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0664942223854 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334705498739 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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