At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
The young population has taken the elderly over in several nations recently. The current trend has brought both benefits and drawbacks; however, I do believe that the former outweighs the latter because of various convincing reasons.
On the one hand, the increasing number of young adults has caused two significant disadvantages for society. Firstly, it results in a great burden on education. Teenagers who have finished their high schools have to go to vocational schools, colleges, and universities in order to have professional skills for their future career. Therefore, families and governments have to spend a great number of bucks on their study. Secondly, the younger citizens, the more crimes occurred. In some developing countries, social juvenile crimes like child abuse, drug abuse, robbery, road offenses and the like have resulted in various detrimental consequences for society and also individuals.
On the other hand, the significantly large number of young citizens has contributed greatly to society. In terms of a national economy, the trend provides a great number of labor-force. Hardly does the economy develop without the contribution of young employees. In fact, in some industrializing nations, young workers are needed in many fields from heavy industries to modern services. Consequently, the life standard also improves. From the social perspective, the younger generation helps build a fast-moving society. The elderly cannot update the latest news compared to the young adults; therefore, the society with a big number of the youth is full of new fashionable styles and latest trends from all around the world.
From all the above-mentioned, a society with more young citizens than elders also has some disadvantages; however, the advantages are far greater. Authorities should focus on building welfare systems which assist on students’ education to reduce the severe effects of the lack of study.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53691275168 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00473328985 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593959731544 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 13.0 2.52805611222 514% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.5053416243 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0588235294 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5294117647 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64705882353 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18846686981 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532340277131 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511988196503 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100788334559 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397985640268 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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