Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic.
"Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up."
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people claims that only mother have responsibility for decision of pregnancy as well as maturity of their children. Nonetheless, both mother and father play the different important roles in practical and spiritual aspects, thus I concur that fatherhood should be impressed equally as motherhood.
It is obviously that male who has the great strength and stamina is the pillar of the family. Father willingly stands up to protect family against hazards, even to fight with the rude persons such as thieves, criminals, etc… in order to keep their house for safety. Alternately, father accepts to work harder to alleviate the financial burden on mother, for example, they are ready to receive more tasks and to do overtime so as to make family life be wealthier and more convenient.
Moreover, children who are cared for by both mother and father can be developed their spirituality adequately. In other words, father teach them to become a strong person who readily copes with the obstacles or the challenges, while mother teach about love to anyone, animals or anything and empathy with other people's agonies. Hence, these kids will have a flexible behavior with a strong power when needed and a compliance action when desired.
In conclusion, motherhood is truly sacred when they have to carry their child in their womb and suffer the labor pain. However, besides that, father not only keeps home safer and more affluent but also helps their kids be stronger. Therefore, fatherhood also has a large contribution in the process of formation and development comprehensively of their babies.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 279, Rule ID: EQUALLY_AS[1]
Message: Don't say 'equally as'. You can use either 'equally' or 'as' on its own. When comparing two nouns, use 'just as'.
Suggestion: equally; as; just as
...cur that fatherhood should be impressed equally as motherhood. It is obviously that m...
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Line 5, column 424, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...o receive more tasks and to do overtime so as to make family life be wealthier and more ...
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Line 13, column 362, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...opment comprehensively of their babies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21923076923 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71379066313 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638461538462 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0515229036 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.363636364 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.1818181818 7.06120827912 215% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107946530579 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421064229849 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0209720482019 0.0667982634062 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0691196530774 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221580269724 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.