Prevention is better than cure. Researching and treating diseases is too clostly so it would be better to invest in preventive measures.To what extent do you agree?

Maintaining a healthy life style like exercise and nutritious food habits prevents people from diseases, which are caused as a result of, low immunity, especially in children and elders, as the saying goes, "Prevention is better than cure." When we get affected by diseases our savings are lost, because of long term hospitalization and treatments. I personally feel, it is better to take preventive measures.

When we follow healthy habits, we not only avoid sickness but also boost our immunity, as eating nutritious home-made food, contains lot of vitamins and minerals required by human body which make us physically strong and increases our immune power which, helps to keep body away from diseases, as a result we can avoid spending our money in hospitals and pharmacies on medical treatments which could be spent to fulfil the needs of family such as a childs exam fees, buying essential household equipment.

Some people think, it is important to enjoy life so they prefer living a luzurious life by eating unhealthy food, smoking and drinking which are the main causes of diseases as they getting easily prone to infections and end up spending money on researching and treatment which could be used for their future or for their family. However, I think if we are healthy we can enjoy our life better as "Health is Wealth", as Health is crucial to live and spread happiness.

In conclusion, investing in health is like gaining wealth, when we our healthy we can lead a successful life and achieve all our dreams.

Votes
Average: 9.2 (4 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...amily such as a childs exam fees, buying essential household equipment. Some p...
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...re or for their family. However, I think if we are healthy we can enjoy our life ...
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...re healthy we can enjoy our life better as 'Health is Wealth', as Health...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'i think', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'as a result']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.238907849829 0.247107183377 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.17747440273 0.155533422707 114% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0819112627986 0.0946595960268 87% => OK
Adverbs: 0.037542662116 0.0501214627716 75% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0819112627986 0.0437548338989 187% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.112627986348 0.122226691241 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0580204778157 0.0403226058552 144% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.82909330367 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0204778156997 0.0326793684256 63% => OK
Particles: 0.00341296928328 0.00163938923432 208% => OK
Determiners: 0.037542662116 0.0861772015684 44% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0170648464164 0.021408717616 80% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0307167235495 0.011925033212 258% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1549.0 1933.35771543 80% => OK
No of words: 256.0 316.048096192 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.05078125 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.37890625 0.374742101984 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.265625 0.28420135186 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.19921875 0.203846283523 98% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.140625 0.137316102897 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82909330367 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.037074148 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61328125 0.56093040696 109% => OK
Word variations: 65.6237141919 60.7387585426 108% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0891783567 37% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 42.6666666667 20.7743622355 205% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 153.877025215 49.517814964 311% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 258.166666667 127.492653851 202% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 42.6666666667 20.7743622355 205% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.5 0.814263465372 184% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 69.2291666667 49.1944974215 141% => OK
Elegance: 1.37931034483 1.69124875643 82% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248586809785 0.332605444948 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.160279798198 0.102741220458 156% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.114080820416 0.0668466124924 171% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.770166233131 0.534860350844 144% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.250024771937 0.148594505496 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169289225475 0.134430193775 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.091189497698 0.0742795772207 123% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.265273761715 0.324371583561 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0375629062037 0.0638462369009 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165778134221 0.228012699653 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0808409432071 0.058150111329 139% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 6.0 10.4468937876 57% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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