"Prevention is better than cure." Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures. To what extent do you agree.
In today's time health is one of the toughest parameters to take care in busy routine life. Different medicines and antibiotics are there in the market for the cure of diseases. but, still the ancient belief of prevention being better than treatment stands to this day. As preparation is a prerequisite for victory. The elaboration will be explained further.
At present COVID has taken the world by storm and nothing is safe from it. The environment has completely succumb to a halt whether humans, animals, plants and much more all are under the attack from this deadly virus. researches are going on to save people from this horrendous torture. even after the creation of vaccination for this problem by many different developed countries, still it is being advertised and advised by doctors and socialites to wear protection masks, sanitize hands and keep social distancing from each other. So, in this case it is clearly seen that there may be a medicine to inhibit the sudden disaster but still prevention is being made the first priority for the safety of everyone.
The world has faced difficult scenarios before like measles, chickenpox, polio just to name a few and even scientists were successful in making a possible cure for these situations but still prevention was chosen as the first weapon because first it takes a lot more time and lives to develop a safety measure. Second, the cost to produce a cure takes so much more money and fortune which cannot be a cup of tea for every country. In addition to this the living beings are in a state of constant fear, anxiety and depression so prevention should not be completely neglected and still its role is much important as if necessary precautions are taken certain calamities might be prevented from causing damage of a huge scale.
To sum up, it is no doubt research and treatment of any particular problem is important and much more effective but still it cannot be denied that preventive measures are also pretty effective in saving lives in a lesser time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: But
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Suggestion: succumbed
...from it. The environment has completely succumb to a halt whether humans, animals, plan...
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Suggestion: Researches
...nder the attack from this deadly virus. researches are going on to save people from this h...
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Suggestion: Even
...ve people from this horrendous torture. even after the creation of vaccination for t...
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...tion of vaccination for this problem by many different developed countries, still it is being ...
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Suggestion:
...ctive in saving lives in a lesser time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, still, in addition, no doubt, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89595375723 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64770172687 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580924855491 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.9875918896 49.4020404114 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7142857143 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193008677645 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638684646648 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636603077514 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121238619091 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341291583821 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.