Prison is the common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. However, a more effective solution is to provide people a better education.
Do you agree or disagree?
Criminal is the major concern in almost every nations around the world, however, people have put some effective solutions for this problem, such as prison, education, .. and so on. In my opinion, although other than individual prisonalizing, giving access to a proper education is also a comprehensive method, I believe that prison is an essential remedy to address this issue.
There is reason why Educational system is believed to be the key to militigate criminal case. Providing a strong academic foundation will alleviate the development of immoral minds. It is due to the dact that crime mostly happens base on poverty, the education shortages, .., so, if we give citizens a better academic system, this will give them the oppoturnity to be the good guys and will change their perspectives of life. There is a saying '' preventing is better than cure '', although prison will solve the results of crime, education will prevent the crime from the beggining
However, Prisonal solution has many essential advantages. First and foremost,it draws a line between illegal and legal activities.If culprits of serious crimes, such as : murder, kidnap,.. just get away with some penalties, crime will increase significantly due to the awareness of the money power in solving everything, even law.By having prison, government shows that they will have strong actions to prevent illegal activities and will charge the right person for the right crime. In spite of the fact that education is such a human action for criminals, it will create dangerous situation for the surroundings, and prison, in contrast, will keep the citizen away from dangers. there is still possibility for offender to commit crime again, and these situations can happen in the time of their reference education. So, prison is a guarantee with other citizens, that these walls will prevent the lawbreaker from having chance to harm anyone further.
To sum up, despite some people think that giving good education will solve the rate illegal problem better than sending them behind the bars, i personally think that both resolutions are equally essential. We should have a fair perspective to adopt each remedy in suitable cases.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1845.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24147727273 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74020705287 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.7644017585 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.785714286 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1428571429 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174576879462 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575626181903 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654584129867 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109631267702 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257529316602 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.