It is believed that life imprisonment is a better karma for murderers, compared with death penalty. We can never either decide or terminate a person’s life in our legal system, in which is judged as a wrongdoing. I am convinced that life in prison is a better option.
Life in prison has a good meaning to murderers. When criminals commit killing offense, facing the retribution of their own acts by incarceration is reasonable. Albeit, there are still countries confined to death penalty, such as, India, US, Saudi Arabia. Compared with death penalty, criminals are given the right to have rehabilitation during their life in prison. They have the opportunity in life renewal. It is unreasonable to have the capital punishment really thorny.
Another point is that death penalty slide too easily to revenge. An example of this is offenders’ family members who are filled with anger to the innocent, as a result, consequences often lead to take revenge. Disappointments in people who are innocent of guilty, in fact, is never considered as forgivable in their heart, but only resentment grow stronger and stronger. ‘An eye for an eye, a tooth for a tooth’, The retribution which is regarded as innocent, once again, can never make people contented, but only injustice and hatred, rooted deeply in their hearts.
Undeniably, others may say that death penalty is a deterrent execution to those with felony. Though it is suspected that there is no need to have death sentences which is a harsh penalty. Culprits, adjudicated and in the end, should suffer proper penalty which could be homicide.
To recapitulate, this is the fact incarceration is an advantageous punishment which may decrease the criminals if capital punishment not be taken into account. We should end death penalty which is only repeating the crime of killing.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 94, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...terrent execution to those with felony. Though it is suspected that there is no need t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, really, so, still, as for, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18272425249 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01075140302 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568106312292 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.6941823891 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6666666667 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7222222222 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200435646377 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065683936067 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633802396189 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10979672455 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553029877282 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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