Q.some psychologist say that doing absolutely nothing for a period of time each day is the key to decreasing stress in everyday life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Considering numerous stress denominating ways, staying free without indulging in any sort of work is said to be the most effective method for eleminating stress from one's mind . I agree with the above notion at a large extent and would try to scrutinize the reason behind the same .
To begin with, point to hectic schedule and other mind disturbing things, people start feeling overburdened and at a point of time, that burden changes into tensions. Several individuals opine that doing nothing for sometime is not suitable for them as at that particular time certain things start roaming in their head and overthink according to those things. Apart from this, remaining busier assists a person to be away from those thinkings and focus on their work itself.
However, a short span of measurable time aids in reducing stress and found to be predominant wave for the same case . self introspection is must for a person sparing a little time from daily hectic schedulewould definitely help and individual to think about themselves and cope up their stress. this would lead to fresh up a person's mind as well as make it vigilant and comfort in even more productive in certain cases. With sound mind and sound body one can do anything in life. To cite an example, it has been inferred in an survey that, people who spare a little time on daily basis are proved to be more happier as well as energetic as compared to others.
To conclude, spending a small part of a day without doing work is really advantageous for a person's mind as well as body and is considered best for stress reduction but it all depends upon a person itself.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, really, so, well, apart from, sort of, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75352112676 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5933552372 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602112676056 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.6452642438 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.727272727 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8181818182 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170989866912 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640459959018 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047397654478 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106236073587 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0166509816396 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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