Recent advancement in technology has a hugely significant impact on the way the books and music are shared. The internet enables cheaply, or completely free, access to many words and sounds.
For many people, it's a negative development. Firstly, they think that downloading media from the internet without paying is wrong morally and it's a form of stealing. some argue that if anyone downloads the books and music freely from the web, then it gives the loss to the producer. The musicians and the writers who make efforts to publish their music and books get no benefit if these things are available free of cost. Many companies upload their album online to earn money, but hackers steal these albums and make them freely accessible on many sites. This type of stealing gives the great loss to the company so producer will not upload new music on the internet next time. Many companies stopped their work after facing such type of problems.
Today, many people buy books online, but after buying the books, they upload this material to the various sites. Many pirated sites are available which give a chance to download the paid contents freely. Many websites give free access to download the academic material which helps the students a lot.
I conclude that a government must take steps to stop this violation, so the writers face no difficulty to upload new material online.
Recent advancement in technology has a hugely significant impact on the way the books and music are shared. The internet enables cheaply, or completely free, access to many words and sounds.
For many people, it's a negative development. Firstly, they think that downloading media from the internet without paying is wrong morally and it's a form of stealing. some argue that if anyone downloads the books and music freely from the web, then it gives the loss to the producer. The musicians and the writers who make efforts to publish their music and books get no benefit if these things are available free of cost. Many companies upload their album online to earn money, but hackers steal these albums and make them freely accessible on many sites. This type of stealing gives the great loss to the company so producer will not upload new music on the internet next time. Many companies stopped their work after facing such type of problems.
Today, many people buy books online, but after buying the books, they upload this material to the various sites. Many pirated sites are available which give a chance to download the paid contents freely. Many websites give free access to download the academic material which helps the students a lot.
I conclude that a government must take steps to stop this violation, so the writers face no difficulty to upload new material online.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 18, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...any words and sounds. For many people, its a negative development. Firstly, they t...
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Line 2, column 142, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...net without paying is wrong morally and its a form of stealing. some argue that if ...
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Line 2, column 166, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...ong morally and its a form of stealing. some argue that if anyone downloads the book...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1149.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91025641026 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33645028343 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594017094017 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.597148043 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.3846153846 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53846153846 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399964995512 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152605910624 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151731664265 0.0667982634062 227% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278909844246 0.151304729494 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.281651426306 0.056905535591 495% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.