With the recent developments in technology like e-books, some people feel that printed media like books, newspapers, and magazines will soon be a thing of the past. Others feel that these forms of media will never disappear. What is your opinion?
In the modern world, the advancement of technology is conquering every corner of our lives. In the modern world, the advancement of technology is conquering every corner of our lives. Even the reading habit of a person is influenced by modern technology.
This will replace other types of reading materials like books, newspapers, and magazines. However, some people are convinced that these encoded information sources will continuously thrive for a long period of time.
Firstly, it is true that the first growing information technology is providing the people with the real-time valuable information with a click of a computer’s mouse. The invention of the internet paves the way for readers to find news within a minute from any parts of the world. This has significantly saved the time and energy of the readers. Moreover, the online newspaper provides on-demand news service, which is not possible in case of printed-paper.
Nevertheless, E-books are not only easily portable and accessible, but also the prices for online books are much lower compared to the cost we pay for the printed word. They avoid the hassle of waiting in the line and it’s a huge time saver. Needless to say that the advantages of E-books seem to exceed the disadvantages. However, printed books serve as a physical entity, we pass them on, give them friends as a gift which is always considered as a valuable present. I am not certain if I got overly excited about getting a link to an E-book.
In conclusion, some are convinced that readable information on computers will eradicate encoded conventional publications. However, it is indisputable that these paper editing will always remain despite the modern development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19424460432 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00458562978 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579136690647 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0524472545 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.25 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143079189094 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432746001123 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610144376763 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888498479334 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832577319844 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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