Nowadays, it is highly probable that technology has gained significant ubiquity in this digitally integrated world. Courtesy of the advancement and development of technological gadgets, conferences, and meetings has become digitalized at a faster pace. While it is undeniable that several problems are lurking beneath this norm, I am in favor of the view that the beneficial facets have eclipsed the negative downsides of this notion, which will be further elucidated in this essay.
On the one hand, the instability of the Internet connection might affect the flow of business seminars or discussions. There may be disruptions during conference calls by virtue of the participants’ connectivity issues or the dysfunction of microphones at times. This could potentially become an annoyance for others and mislead the flow of the meeting as they may have to propose Internet-fixing solutions for their counterparts. Another problem worth mentioning is the low level of being technologically savvy of some people. Those individuals could be the senior or older managers of the company who might not get used to digital-based calls or meetings. In addition, learning how to fully utilize those technological inventions could be time-consuming and stressful if they are not cut out for them in the first place.
On the other hand, integrating technology at workplaces, especially during the Covid-19 epidemic, could reduce the cost of travel to some extends. It is true that if there were no such conferencing applications like Zoom or Microsoft Teams, businesspeople or individuals of the national authority would have to spend a large amount of money on flights or other means of transportation. Prominent examples of these can be many important meetings having been made online, which may pay dividends for the national budget as more money could be spent on making vaccines or facilitate people in need. Furthermore, this notion can precipitate working from home and decrease the prevalence of furloughed stages of some persons. This can be beneficial as workers could manage their time more flexibly with emails and planning-centric applications, as well as companies will be able to retain employees.
In conclusion, notwithstanding issues such as possible distractions during online discussions, technological integration in the sphere of business may be a great help in cutting costs as well as maintaining the work-life balance of employees. All things considered, it could be predicted that technology will continue to grow immensely in the future.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, may, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, it is true, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 7.85571142285 267% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2169.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46347607053 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30082086894 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591939546599 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 677.7 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1801837913 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.5625 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8125 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0347031912162 0.244688304435 14% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0126296167929 0.084324248473 15% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0198676301729 0.0667982634062 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0252872878189 0.151304729494 17% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0129547857446 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 78.4519038076 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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