In these days we see that the amount of crimes start to increase we can see it in our modern life especially young people there are lot of reason for this problem. Now I discuss it.
Firstly, in our busy life the parents are busy to raise money for their children so they leave their children without educate them or take care for their children. So, children will go and watch TV, films and social media. For example, now there are lot of film that there lot of crimes so children teach from them or from social media that children imitate the characters of their favorite actors this is not good thing because some them not welfare person.
Secondly, now, we are living in a life where prices are starting to rise, so there are some people who cannot live because of these pieces. They tend to steal because of poverty. So they steal for food and to lead a good life.
To solve this problem, families must take care about their children and teach them because when they learn a good education when they are young, we will have a safe future. The government must see the film that have this kind of crimes and make band for children.
In addition, The government must take care about the salary of all people and they place discounts and do not make prices too expensive to reduce theft.
In conclusion, I think these reasons must be taken in to consideration and try to solve them as quickly as possible to obtain a bright future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 143, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... as possible to obtain a bright future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1175.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46768060837 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14710758593 2.80592935109 77% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498098859316 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.8056946257 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9166666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100787990883 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422523293128 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427978981766 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0605385431912 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519856994988 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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