As a result of tourism and the increasing number of people travelling, there is an growing demand for more flights.
What problems does this have on the environment?
What measures could be taken to solve the problems?
It is thought by some that the demand for additional flights is increasing due to fact that more and more people travel for tourism purposes. As a result, climate might change around the world but this can be tackled by creating tourist resorts everywhere and using high-speed trains.
The main problem for environment due to increasing number of flights is that climate will change as airplanes release huge amount of exhaust fumes. It is approved that exhaust fumes create harmful layer of smoke in our atmosphere, this smoke cup sunlight and heat inside the earth atmosphere as a result greenhouse effect caused. As a result, glaciers start to melt as earth surface became warmer, consequently ocean water level may increases and more and more water will evaporate to the atmosphere as a result precipitations will become more intensive. Furthermore, people around the world will face environment problems such as tsunami, droughts, floods and earthquakes.
One effective solution to deal with climate changes caused by an increasing number of flights is to create tourist resorts in all parts of the word. For example, each country has big lakes, seas and mountains and the governments could create there tourist traps for their citizens, as a result people will not have to travel overseas. Another possible solution is to develop and expand usage of high-speed trains. High-speed trains are environment- friendly as they do not use fossil fuels in order to move, high-speed trains are comfortable and can get people to their destination for short time. However, these solutions are financially demanding and poorer countries will not be able to implement these innovations so developed countries should provide monetary help to them.
In conclusion, an increasing number of flights will trigger climate change this can be solved by using high-speed trains and having recreation places in all countries.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, however, may, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27540983607 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75506228253 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554098360656 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.0204417272 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.083333333 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4166666667 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263843198154 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968791997842 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592043453664 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170989170901 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285165657855 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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