In some societies, the number of crimes committed by teenagers is growing. Some people think that regardless of age, teenagers who commit major crimes should receive adult punishment.
To what extent do you agree?
It is thought by some that in a few communities crimes that committed by teenagers is increasing as a result many people suppose that juveniles should be punished equally with adults for committing common crimes. In my opinion, while rigorous punishment might prevent future crimes, having punishment system that based on the background, is the key.
Firstly, it must be admitted that having equal punishment laws for teenagers might prevent future crimes. These is because before admitting any crime juveniles will be informed that will get tough punishment, as a result they will think many times whether commit crime or not. Without rigorous laws teenagers will take it as advantage and repeat crimes in future.
Another point to consider is that some crimes teenagers commit under pressure or influence by bad friends or companies. When young adults get into bad company or watch many movies about crime authorities, they tend to commit crimes as they do not clearly understand what is bad and they might for example steal something. In such cases they should not be punished as adults they should get light punishment and law education.
Finally, the best solution would be introduce flexible punishment law for teenagers and children. For example, when juvenile committed light crime for the first time they should be sent to special schools where they will learn law and make some public works in order to understand that it is immoral. In contrast, if a teenager committed a serious crime or it was light crime but for the second time, they should be punished as adults. As a result, our society will become safer.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, so, while, for example, in contrast, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02962962963 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51219249086 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525925925926 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3967591551 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.166666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272894448328 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1193288072 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892236082503 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190031609279 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0201931013817 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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