Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
Write at least 250 words.
As the number of scientific researches has increase significantly during a few last decades due to the support of technological advancements, opinion has been divided on whether or not governments should completely in charge of them. Although there are many private organizations that possess enough resources to carry out such matter, my view is that governmental managements on scientific researches will likely bring more benefits to the society.
Nowadays, several multinational corporations have tried to execute their own academic researches, especially in scientific field, to improve their business performances. Such companies usually have strong financial support for those researches, and they are willing to hire professional scientists to join them. Scientific researches controlled by private organizations are generally considered more profitable as they usually serve for the purposes of enhancing business activities, which means better products and services for customers. In addition, those researches are likely free of political pressure, the fact that leads to a higher contribution from researchers.
Notwithstanding the foregoing benefits of running scientific researches by private companies, I believe that those projects should be carried out and controlled by the governments. Among the agreeable advantages of governmental managements on scientific researches are more control on environmental effect and better use to benefit the society. It is quite undeniable that doing scientific researches could harm the environment at certain a level, as chemical substances involving on those researches might be disposed without any treatments. The appropriate management of governments will likely alleviate such impacts on environment as well as protect the habitats of other living species. Furthermore, scientific researches carried out and controlled by government are believed to improve the world welfare as well as contribute to the overall development of humankind. Consequently, achievement from those researches are usually more beneficial for the whole society.
From the aforementioned discussion, it is arguable that while scientific researches carried out by private organizations could be useful in economic scale, the management of governments on such type of researches will likely bring more benefits for the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...vancements, opinion has been divided on whether or not governments should completely in charge...
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Line 3, column 317, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...trol on environmental effect and better use to benefit the society. It is quite und...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, if, so, well, while, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2027.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 6.01483679525 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35397956363 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528189910979 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 637.2 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.0037653042 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.923076923 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9230769231 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246918447474 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0976930059188 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605043926429 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163079836002 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534593513642 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.0946893788 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 20.72 50.2224549098 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.87 12.4159519038 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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