Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by governments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that scientific projects should be conducted and managed by authorities instead of personal organizations. In my view, I believe that both governments and individual businesses also have the right and duty to carry out research.
On the one hand, governments should play the leading role in performing research due to a number of reasons. First of all, scientific research is the key to finding solutions to the pressing concerns of society. Thorough medical research, for example, needs to be conducted by governments to search vaccines against potential epidemics. Research into renewable energies is also crucial to deal with global warming. These kinds of research require a great deal of expenditure, which can only be afforded by the government. In addition, scientific studies sponsored and observed by authorities will ensure that reliable and ethical methods are used, and minimize the risk of these studies being used for criminal activities. For instance, without governments control, some companies can conduct illegal research involved in nuclear weapons or unethical human trials and that pose a serious threat to society.
However, scientific research requires to have larger sums to perform, therefore governments incapably cover to proceed with many scientific studies. In fact, many useful scientific discoveries have been made by private institutions. To illustrate, the invention of the iPhone by Apple, a corporation in the US began the era of smartphone and facilitated modern forms of interaction between people around the world. Furthermore, individual organizations can reduce governments' spending on scientific investigation, thence authorities can use that money to invest in important areas such as education and public health care services.
In conclusion, although governments should control and carry out major scientific research, private companies should not be deprived of the right to do studies.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66894197952 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07053069417 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607508532423 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4237611511 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.642857143 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7142857143 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359823161211 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121005850262 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117143920297 0.0667982634062 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266311311998 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.149163172047 0.056905535591 262% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.