Scientist and the news are presenting ever more evidence of climate change. Government cannot be expected to solve this problem.It is responsibility of individuals to change their lifestyle to prevent further damage.What are your view?
Nowadays,more and more scientists concerned that climate change is becoming serious because of greenhouse that government must introduce to measures to reduce.In addition, politicians and environmentalist also encourages to individuals make change to their lifestyle.I completely agree that government and individuals should take join responsibility for this problem.
To start with,industry is developing quickly,resulting in a increasing in the number of the greenhouse gas emission.This is government actions.Several measures could be solved pollution such as limiting or increasing tax of the use of fossil fuel.Furthermore,government should take to the support policies which subsidize industry to clean up their production processes.
In addition,individuals play an important role to reduce pollution.If individuals also change their lifestyle,government policies are able to succeed.For instance,people should use reasonably about energy in their home.By using less electricity,people can alter by natural sources such as solar power or compact light bulb.Moreover,I think that individual attitudes need to change immediately.Instead of driving personal cars,people should use public transport or walk to work and study.
In conclusion,I firmly believe that climate change will be soft if leadership proposes timely measures and individual behavior change.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1189.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 185.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.42702702703 5.12529762239 125% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.23035052866 2.80592935109 151% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.67027027027 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 20.2975951904 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 128.133719216 49.4020404114 259% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 297.25 106.682146367 279% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.25 20.7667163134 223% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 27.5 7.06120827912 389% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251652457905 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152736350527 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760028214964 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152736350527 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760028214964 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.0 13.0946893788 244% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -9.05 50.2224549098 -18% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.0 11.3001002004 230% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 20.9 12.4159519038 168% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.64 8.58950901804 136% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 33.5 9.78957915832 342% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.1190380762 202% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.