Scientists have been warning for many years about the importance of protecting the environment and that we must limit the use of energy in our daily lives. Despite warnings,many people do not do this.What are the reasons for that and how people can be e

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Scientists have been warning for many years about the importance of protecting the environment and that we must limit the use of energy in our daily lives. Despite warnings,many people do not do this.

What are the reasons for that and how people can be encouraged to take an interest in protecting the environment?

Researchers have been alert for myriad years about the pressure of saluting the environment and that we must boundary the use of energy in our often life. Although warnings,manifold individuals do not do this. This essay will discuss on the reasons, negative impacts and end up with some preventive measures.

To commence with,gases such as carbon dioxide trap heat from the sun. Industries and vehicles produce emissions and exhaust fumes. Furthermore,this kind of gases are detrimental for everyone's life. In addition,many developing nations are becoming industrialized.Nowadays technology is improving day-to-day. To cite an example, according to the recent report in “THE TIMES OF INDIA” harmful gases through temperature is gradually increase therefore it is not good for everybody's life.

Apart from this,global warming will have a significant impact on our planet. Rising temperature will cause Melting of the polar ice caps. Additionally,people except more extreme weather. There are many factors are affected by the environment like noise pollution,water pollution,air pollution and so on. For instance,on account of the recent survey by “THE GOVERNMENT” decided mankind used public transportation than private transportation hence save the environment and fuel.

In conclusion,people save the environment and fuel so it is beneficial in future and public transportation through human beings are a safe journey with cheaper rate .

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, apart from, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 213.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.92018779343 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.70850554316 2.80592935109 132% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.699530516432 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.0304431521 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0714285714 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2142857143 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257268417137 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716890232457 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762212952086 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143214224913 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0936507536399 0.056905535591 165% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.87 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.46 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.31 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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