Scientists predict in the near future cars will be driven by computers notpeople Why Do you think it is a positive or negative development

One of the most contemporary issues that receive concerns from various parts of the world is the rapid development in Artificial Intelligence (AI) applied to the production of cars. Therefore, it is predicted that cars will be controlled by software instead of humans. In the following paragraphs, the causes could be analyzed with some effects being indicated.

First and foremost, this trend could be attributed to some factors that should be taken into consideration. A justification is human beings always follow greater living standards and higher convenience, which could lead to the inevitable presence of automatic cars being inevitable. Take Tesla or Toyota as an example. Particularly, they are the most popular car brands in the world, being the successful pioneers in the auto industry with trial features. Another point worth mentioning is the extensive development of technological advances, especially in the explosive information technology era as these days, AI seems to displace humans in several positions, and as a result, it is possible that human drivers will be discharged and altered by driving software in the near future. It is a fact that in some developed nations, there are many metro systems or public transportation routes which are operated run without human control.

It can be undeniable that automatic cars could bring to individuals and the whole society various benefits. To begin with, they may partly eliminate a huge number of severe traffic accidents caused by irresponsible drivers. Moreover, thanks to the auto-driving software, people can save remarkable time spent doing lucrative tasks instead of driving while they are sitting in the car. Last but not least, the application of AI to 4 four-wheeled vehicles may cut down considerable financial funds which are invested in renting a human driver. For example, training fees, and living expenses.

In conclusion, computerized drivers replacing human drivers could be provoked by a number of different reasons which might bring several merits to the global economy and the whole society.

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Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1765.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41411042945 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9867236687 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616564417178 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.8044246344 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.666666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157926813668 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534577305452 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500779008357 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0936276572815 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526901055731 0.056905535591 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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