Although, online shopping is rising in many areas and it is very popular among people, it has some different influences on the environment and the kinds of careers which could be positive or negative.
To begin with, people tend to purchase products in various websites rather than going shopping centers because of lack of time or being busy. It appears that this kind of shopping has a significant impact on several jobs and many workers who are worried about their position. For instance, rate of unemployment is increased many vocations in shopping malls and stores are lost, because owners prefer to sell their goods online and there is no demand for workers or assistants. Moreover, it is not required for paying taxes or rents in using websites or different apps.
Actually, this approach can be profitable for some people. For illustration, it could be a beneficial opportunity to commence an occupation with little money. In addition, there are many handicrafts or paints which are impossible to be shown in frequent art fairs, therefore, this method is helpful.
On the other hand, it should not be neglected that environment is affected by this sort of shopping. Apparently, some problems are solved because of buying in websites. For example, decreasing traffic congestion is one of them which has direct effect on air and sound pollution. Besides, lack of spaces for car parking is another problem that made people nervous and angry. Hence, purchasing online make an appropriate situation for people to buy whatever they want in any time without wasting time.
In conclusion, however, shopping online has performed as well as people expect from, it causes many changes on environment and condition of careers that it is better to be aware about.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, apparently, besides, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, sort of, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07931034483 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71027682638 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596551724138 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7502769671 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.214285714 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.2142857143 7.06120827912 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135464294015 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455075164769 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382595734469 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0789136407706 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245266266321 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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