Should teenagers spend more time on such cultural activities as enjoying music or theatre, etc and less time on sports? Why or why not.
In recent years, how the adolescents spend their freetime have been a great concern. Some people think that more time should be spent on cultural activities rather than sport. Although cultural activities are important, the benefits of sports are undeniable so i think the teenagers should spend equal time for both of them.
On the one hand, cultural activities are necessary. Firstly, it helps teenagers to develop their mental health, by enjoying music and theatres they can have a deeper sense of the world and life. Moreover, young people can broaden their knowledge about many cultural aspects by being involed in cultural activities. For example, they can have a more realistic sight about other country customs and traditions by watching foreign movies.
On the other hand, sports play a really important role. Teenagers cannot enjoy any cultural activities if they are not healthy enough. Sports help people to keep fit , just by practicing 30 minutes per day people can have fit bodies with strong muscles. Furthermore, young people learn a lot of new and useful skills while they play sports. For instance, they learn how to work with a team when they participate in a team sport.
In conclusion, both cultural activities and sports have good effect on teenagers and should be given equal attention by the adolescents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, really, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1116.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 218.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11926605505 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55909900535 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587155963303 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4642578429 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8461538462 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7692307692 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270866071912 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102997912596 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090719787887 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176131763842 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0854810322324 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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