should there be minimum school going age or should students and their parents are free to decide when they join School. to what extent do you agree or disagree.
It is well known proverb that, "for any incident occur in our lives, there is perfect time', and this is with schooling age of kids. In present day, one of the most controversial issue is; perfect age of children to attend schools. I completely agree with the fact that, there should be minimum school going age for students. Through this essay, I will explore the same with some examples and assertions, and will shape up my opinion at the end.
To begin with, though the primary function of schools is to provide education; but it also bring a lot of burden to child: the homework, strict school timings, constraint schedule; this all adds to extreme problems faced by kids. If, they are sent to school so early they cannot withstands such conditions, which will hinder the normal mental and physical development of child. A survey was conducted by "World Health Organisation" in 2017, proving the fact that; the IQ (intelligent quotient) of children who begin their schooling at the age of 3 years is far more than students who started the education in age of 2.5 or 2 years.
Furthermore, if the age of student is more than required age, they will face the problem of grasping the things. It is scientifically proved fact that; as the human age increases, the learning capacity declines. Hence, a preferable age limit is set, that is, 3 to 3.5 years; as per research paper published by Hindustan Times on September 21, 2018. Moreover, if child is student is sitting in lower standard, who supposed to be in higher class, this give child sense of separation then other class; which can cause psychological pressure on child.
On the whole, it can be said that, knowledge and education is important; but the children's mental as well as physical condition must be considered. Though in some exception cases children have capacity to attend schools earlier; but the government can implement, as a law, to set minimum age for schooling.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 250, Rule ID: AGREE_WITH_THE_FACT[1]
Message: Use simply 'agree that'.
Suggestion: agree that
...hildren to attend schools. I completely agree with the fact that, there should be minimum school going a...
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Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'brings'?
Suggestion: brings
...ls is to provide education; but it also bring a lot of burden to child: the homework,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, then, well, as well as, on the whole, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87687687688 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77513875127 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597597597598 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.9053542087 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.923076923 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6153846154 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226563793806 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836957957131 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080388283907 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133019896436 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335313665372 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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