Shyness
What do you know about shyness? It is a psychological state that causes a person to feel discomfort in social situations. Their symptoms are often speechless, breathless, or even shaky. To resolve this problem, social scientists have made studies to find the causes of shyness. They have found that shyness can result from both biological and environmental factors.
Genetics is a biological cause that forms shyness. This means some infants are born shy. Shy parents and grandparents are more likely to have shy children. Therefore, genetics is a cause of shyness.
However, shy temperament in genetics may increase through life experiences. On the other hand, most shy people develop shyness because of environmental factors.
The first environmental cause of shyness is family life. Overprotective parents associate with shy behavior in children. With the fear of danger, those parents don’t allow their children to experience new things, leading them to feel shy when facing unfamiliar situations, such as meeting new friends or traveling far. So, family life is an environmental cause that develops shyness.
The second environmental cause of shyness is culture. In fact, there is a higher level of shyness among people in Asia than in Europe. Asians who are afraid of judgment don't feel confident in expressing personal opinions or speaking in public; in contrast, Europeans don't be the same. Therefore, culture associate with shyness.
The third environmental cause of shyness is technology. Technology keeps people busy in the virtual world, and there is little time for them to have real interaction and nurture their relationships. Because of poor social interaction, they become socially isolated and feel shy among the crowd. In short, technology is another environmental cause of shyness.
Nevertheless, it is helpful to consider the advantage of being shy. Shy people could be the best conversationalist due to the fact that they're so in-tune with what each person in the group is saying. They talk less, listen carefully, and make others feel valued. Therefore, while shyness has some negative aspects, it also affects positively.
In conclusion, although shyness is caused by biological factors and environmental factors, there are not without workable approaches to tackle it. By learning social skills and applying relaxation techniques, shy people can make the problem to a manageable level.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, third, while, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, in short, such as, you know, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2062.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48404255319 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00007073253 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55585106383 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 625.5 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 16.0721442886 180% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5982693543 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.1034482759 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9655172414 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.68965517241 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 24.0 3.9879759519 602% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381431615204 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1465146027 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146642936028 0.0667982634062 220% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211855190165 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0763693432118 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.62 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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