Nowadays, social media is growing in popularity among people of all age. Despite of their many advantages, these websites also present some risks associated to the costumer's privacy. In my opinion, the innovating way of communication brought by social media is considerably powerful and is worth compared to the disadvantages.
In fact, when people share their ideas and knowledges online, they are proposing a great moment of education which is beneficial for everyone. For instance, a social issue widely discussed on Facebook can open different views and health discussions may emerged, leading to a new awareness and sensitization of the users on a particular problem. Furthermore a social media such as Youtube has presented a huge change in entertainment industry, since the audience is directly connected to the entertainer and feel the advantage of being closer to him.
However, Facebook, Twitter, Instagram and so on are considered to have many drawbacks. If people share their personal information, they are also more exposed to some unpleasant situations. Two well known problems of social media are cyberbullying and cybersecurity. The first one is often affected by young people who are more vulnerable than adults and can experiment online dramatic mocking by kids of their own age. The second one is due to the fact that whoever is connected to, for example, Facebook is providing confidential data, risking hacking and identity theft. Hence, using social media might put the young but also the adults in dangerous and precautions have to be taken.
To conclude, I think that social websites offer an opportunity of being part of a solid and stimulating community, although their consequent risks, especially for naive users, have to be taken into account. Therefore, a correct and careful use is recommended.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 165, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'costumers'' or 'costumer's'?
Suggestion: costumers'; costumer's
...so present some risks associated to the costumers privacy. In my opinion, the innovating ...
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Line 3, column 346, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...n of the users on a particular problem. Furthermore a social media such as Youtube has pres...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i think, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33448275862 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0236110106 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624137931034 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9287799787 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8571428571 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291852400133 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983897580589 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0944372422407 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171967232774 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590256927206 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.