Society is becoming obsessed with material goods like fast cars, designer clothes and flashy jewellery. We have stopped caring about important things and that is why divorce rate are so high and family bonds are not as strong anymore, our value system is disintegrating. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
It is incontrovertible fact that today people became materialistic for the convenient lifestyle. However, the relationship are not strong as compared to the past because of it. I, to agree with this opinion and this essay will delve into reasons for the same.
To embark with, in this materialistic era people want to achieve the material goods in their life. These things give to people comfortable, luxury and easy life also, it became necessity of every person. As well as, in same ways relationships also depend on it. For example, parents give everything to their children although they are becoming materialistic but, they fulfill every wish of their children and, it create the better relationship between them.
Furthermore, today, people are most consider the personal possessions of boy or girl and not his or her characteristics like behavior and age when they are start a new relation like marriage. All this happening because of materialistic nature and it is increasing the amount of divorce rate. In addition to this, everyone want to achieve success and material goods in their life and they have not much time to spend with their family. So, it make the family bonding weak.
In conclusion, the world change dramatically with the passes of time and people are forgot the value of important things as well as value system is disintegrating. It has adversely effect on the society especially on the relationship.
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Message: Did you mean 'creates'?
Suggestion: creates
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Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...time to spend with their family. So, it make the family bonding weak. In conclusi...
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Suggestion: effected
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1201.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08898305085 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95492749894 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588983050847 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8146074583 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3846153846 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1538461538 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151458281643 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546904615626 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474927185253 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0950454068334 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530377616764 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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