The society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose,
and can even be damaging.
Nowadays, the advertisement is an inevitable part of people daily life. Most of the producer or any group of people who offer a particular service use an appropriate king of advertisement to introduce their products or services. Some people believe that advertising should be forbidden. Despite the fact that this idea might be true for some kind of special thing, but I disagree with this idea because of a couple of reasons.
First of all, it should be stuck in the mind that advertising is a potential method to introduce new production which result in more available choices. In fact, awareness of people would increase about new developments and recent invention. It is noteworthy to say that advertising some things such as alcoholic drinks or tobacco products should not be allowed in public due to the negative impact on the society.
On the other hand, advertisement can be a considered as a motivation. This refer to the competitive market where all manufacturers and producers should cope with their rivals and introduce their specific options or try to boost their productivity and their quality. It brings new set of concerns and cause an active production industry where people are seeking for new technologies and more facilities. Also, advertisement can result in getting reputation in international markets which leads to more nation income. For example, those advertisement that are related to tourist attraction can bring with it a massive amount of money.
Taking everything into consideration, it seems that advertisement is an efficient method that can be very helpful and have some fundamental benefits for both common people and producers.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-01-31 | yaldaasgari | 61 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 530, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this advertisement' or 'those advertisements'?
Suggestion: this advertisement; those advertisements
...ads to more nation income. For example, those advertisement that are related to tourist attraction ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, for example, in fact, kind of, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0533311004 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574626865672 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8864861733 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.230769231 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166269828095 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680057092284 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399478120734 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107096053664 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00482400074518 0.056905535591 8% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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