Solving environmental problems should be the responsibility of one international organisation rather than each national government. Do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that handling environmental issues belongs to transnational organizations while others believe that protecting surroundings should be the duty of each individual nation. In my view, I agree that having one global organization specializing in solving environmental problems can be beneficial, but we should not exclude the government's responsibility.
On the one hand, I think it is necessary for every country's authority to deal with their own green issues. Although an environmental problem may look alike, in different regions it stems from various causes that need different approaches and solutions. For example, while Alaska, the USA is facing desertification caused by deforestation and over-exploitation of resources, desertification in Beijing, China is the result of accelerated urbanization. Hence, these two countries need to apply distinct methods to their own difficulties, which calls for the liability and intervention of the government.
On the other hand, having one international organization to solve environmental problems around the world allows countries to find a common voice in protecting habitat and enhancing greater cooperation between nations. It is a fact that third world countries do not own advanced technologies and lack of experience to clear up every matter. Thus, to develop effective solutions to green issues, they need international support, especially from developed countries, which can be attained through global organizations.
In conclusion, although it is good to have a transnational organization to assist with solving environmental issues, the authority's role remains crucial in ensuring thorough resolution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 336, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...neficial, but we should not exclude the governments responsibility. On the one hand, I t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, may, so, third, thus, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.92181069959 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.56625618875 2.80592935109 127% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625514403292 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9448023215 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.9 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224583979076 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818756872998 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830539195971 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135292307633 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10432845361 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.35 12.4159519038 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.42 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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