Solving environmental problems should be responsibility of International organisation insted of each national government.
Do you agree or disagree?
Environmental problem has become a sparkling issue in the modern world. Some assert that international organisations will take the responsibility to solve this major problem. I strongly disagree with this view. In my opinion, to solve environmental problems need mutual understanding of the international organisation and each national government.
On one hand, International organisations such as GGIO plays an inevitable role to make aware people about our environment. Pollutions are increasing day by day in the every metro cities. International organisation organise different campaign and program in the most populated countries with their citizens to make understand them to threat of environment in upcoming days. However, every year they arrange conferences in developed countries and invite different national government. As a result, they can discuss about the environmental problem and how to overcome from this problem. Besides, they give some target to every country to control environmental pollution. For instance, in 2008 after a mutual contract between Bangladesh and Asian Environment Counsel, Bangladesh government banned to use plastic which below 50 micron thickness because plastic is non biodegradable and when it bunts it emits harmful feum into the atmosphere. Therefore, international organisation are always trying to take responsibility to work with government of each country because it will be very difficult for them to work alone with this sensitive issue.
On the other hand, each government and the citizen of the country have the major responsibility to solve environmental problems. Government can take many initiatives to solve this problem by asked every district and union to launch a massive campine about awareness of environmental problem. Besides they also make some static rules and stick fines are imposed on the violetators of those laws. In addition, each national government work with international organisation to make some project that would be solve environmental problem. For example, Japan Environmental Management Association and Bangladesh government launched a project in 2011 and they appointed 1200 volunteer in Bangladesh to plantation trees on the world environment day. They successfully planted 35000 trees that year and all environmental experts appreciated it.
To conclude, although International organisation can be taken responsibility to solve environmental problems. However, it will be very difficult if each national government do not cooperate with them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 293, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Besides,
...out awareness of environmental problem. Besides they also make some static rules and st...
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Line 5, column 668, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'volunteer' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'volunteers'.
Suggestion: volunteers
...project in 2011 and they appointed 1200 volunteer in Bangladesh to plantation trees on th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.3376753507 288% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2165.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.81989247312 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35379063274 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518817204301 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 685.8 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5755210694 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.25 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400776668992 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134860934453 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111493837402 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.312063891865 0.151304729494 206% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0753451368298 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.48 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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