Some believe that poaching is illegal. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
People think that underhand hunting endangered animals is against the law. From my perspective, I totally agree that this issue is unlawful and must be prohibited promptly to protect our ecosystem.
Poaching is considered the most serious threat to the survival of animals. People hunt down wild or rare animals excessively and wrongly can lead to the problem that these species will be extinct in the near future. To clarify, poachers take advantages of tracking the horns of rhinoceros extremely, it also means that they are dropping of animal populations, gradually, this species may be died out because of their illicit behaviors.
Poaching also makes the ecosystem of the environment unbalanced. The act of those people has a negative impact on the transformation of the surroundings. To illustrate, illegal hunting not only causes pollution but also exceeds the tolerance of organism and humans, if people still poach extremely, the stability of ecosystem will be devastated in coming years. This inhumane activity leads to the fact that numerous wildlife babies are orphaned, often unable to survive themselves.
Moreover, both poaching and the way that modern people live contaminates the nature. The elimination of dust and smoke from the factories, industrial zones or from those vehicles in the congestion has a substantial impact on the environment as well.
In conclusion, poaching is not only a serious problem but also a criminal act. This must be forbidden directly for not leading to many dangerous issues and at the same time, the administration had better propose some resolutions to maintain the balance of the world surroundings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, still, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34732824427 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96386026802 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614503816794 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4507460053 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.769230769 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0695595219329 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0279766557549 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0276456130947 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0390799795042 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.013344162642 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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