Some believe that young people should have a university education, because this will bring benefits to the society in future. Others, however think it will lead to graduate unemployment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is incontrovertible fact that today, all young people prefer to do university education as compared to the past. Few masses accord that tertiary education has plethora of advantages but, other say that it will lead unemployment. This essay examines both aspects and argues, in the favour of pursuing further studies.
To embark with, in the development of society graduate people has great contribution in every field. In past time, people were not educated and they have not more facilities but, now because of education they have creativity mind and they make life easier and comfortable. For example, the doctors give healthier lifestyle and engineer makes life convenient or offer better infrastructures as well as teacher give education. All this happening with the help of graduate students.
The alternative view-point is that all the graduate do not get job because of two major reasons. Firstly, if every person will complete his or her graduation the demand of job will increase in same professional like engineering and medical. As a result, these job have no much vaccines for his or her . To epitomise, every person want to do jobs in high profession Secondly, educated people mostly prefer high paid jobs and, which related their education.
In my opinion, the graduation will lead the unemployment but, it will not happen because of college education. The educated people will became unemployed the wrong choice of course or stream. As result, they have only degrees but, they have not any practical skill about their subjects. So, anybody should not miss opportunity being graduated because it has a lot of benefits to the people. It increase the overall personality to the people like, they make mature, knowledgeable and get experience.
In conclusion, requiring knowledge not harms to anyone. In fact, it is helpful in many aspects like personal and professional. Therefore, university education should persuade by the youngster. But, the limitations related it should also not be ignored to avoid any negative consequences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, in fact, of course, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2743902439 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91757533267 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564024390244 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5723809385 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280687916299 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781472062053 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610164081725 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143575967593 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619135076701 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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