Some companies sponsor sport as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while others think there are disadvantagesDiscuss both views and give your opinion

In the age of mobile phones, laptops,television, i-pad etc. sports is the only source left for entertainment an replaces any physical activity. The cost of the things used by each player like badminton, tennis racket , cricket bat etc. is increasing day by day.But when other companies sponsor sports the expenses becomes a bit relief.In return, sponsoring party look forward for their own benefits.Let us go through the pros and cons of taking money for sports from other parties.
To being with, when a company sponsor a sport it is not only the salary of the player which increases but also the brand value of the company accelerates.Every so often, the sports committee fails to organize an event due ti lack of funds.In such situation, even a small help from external party makes it possible for the vent to happen as planned.
Although, the event is successful the question here to ask is, do the players and audience really enjoy sports to the fullest.Many times the sponsoring companies ask for the benefits like frequent advertisement , 60-70% of the share form the profit or even worse like an equal partnership with sports committee.As a result, the sport becomes nothing but a promotional event.The best example is Indian Premier League. Players end up getting owned by parties who have only financial and political interest associated with the game and thus loose the enthusiasm to play from the heart.
In my opinion, in spite of being looked as a distraction or disturbance during the sport , we need companies to provide financial help.Sports encourage the nation to remain healthy and happy.But to what extent the game and players are actually benefited should also be considered and not only promotion of the companies.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, look, really, so, thus, as a result, in my opinion, in spite of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05574912892 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8892868665 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623693379791 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 127.403885341 49.4020404114 258% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 181.375 106.682146367 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.875 20.7667163134 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12766235911 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488214939116 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439173801081 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0805147096772 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0109420309468 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 13.0946893788 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.66 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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