Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while others think there are disadvantages to this.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
people have different views about the question of whether it is okay for companies to sponsor sports in order to advertise themselves. While some people disagree with the idea of sponsoring sports, I believe that this could have positive effects.
On the one hand, companies' advertisements by sponsoring sports could lead to a selection of a brand based on false aspects. Many sports stars are sponsored by various types of companies, from sport wears to insurance. people can be manipulated by companies whose advertisements are with their favourite sports stars. If a sports star is sponsored and on a company's advertisement, people who like the sports star would be influenced to trust the company regardless of other factors of the company, such as the quality of their products or services and responsibilities to society. As a result, sponsoring sports would make people to rely on sports stars when choosing reliable companies.
However, I would agree with those who believe that it would be beneficial for companies to sponsor sports for advertising themselves. The main reason for this view is that it would promote sports itself. In modern life, people spend much less time on leisure sports and other activity, and it is important to encourage people to be involved in such activities. By engaging sports stars, people can be inspired to start sports activities. Another reason for this opinion is that it would benefit the sports industry. Athletes can focus on their training with improved quality of equipment and environment with financial support sponsored by companies. In other words, they can present more interesting moments in the competition, which intrigues people to watch and have more interest in those sports.
In conclusion, although it can be argued that sponsorships as advertisement can have negative effects, my view is that it could have beneficial consequences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31578947368 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94429578737 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506578947368 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9785457215 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.733333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2666666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258921084604 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104931130742 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047958719798 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163977207974 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0875749700075 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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