Some countries are handing over public services such as hospitals, railways and education to private companies to be run for commercial profit. Are governments justified in letting private profit manage the public interest?
Simply stated, privatization is the transfer of government functions to the private sector. Governments in the modern world are increasingly privatizing the public service utilities to operate them in an efficient and effective manner. However, this has brought forth some serious concerns about the process. But, in my opinion, with proper set of rules and regulations, these issues could be resolved and privatization can play an inevitable role towards the progress of the country.
On one hand, there are some worries in public regarding the process of privatization. Firstly, many individuals believe that objective of serving the people may be lost by the privatization. The greed for higher profit or private companies has increased the cost burden on the consumers. For instance, privatization of electricity transmission and distribution has substantially increased household electricity cost. In addition to this, it is against the public interest as they pay taxes to the government for these facilities. So, they expect to receive these facilities at reasonable cost.
On the other hand, there are certain benefits that are too large they cannot be ignored. First of all, it is necessary to understand why governments go for the option of privatization? The answer is that, it all depends upon the economic stability of a country. There are certain departments that become white elephants for economic progress. Therefore, it becomes necessary to privatize such institutes to earn a handsome amount of profit from them.
Moreover, privatization leads toward less political influence that would also increase efficiency and effectiveness. For example, In Switzerland, a few decades before number of accidents at highway were considerably higher. Investigations proved that number of driving license were issued to inexperience drivers in exchange for bribes. However, transferring service to private company improves the situation.
To conclude, privatization must be on the table if the country is to prosper. The concerns can be solved by governments through setting up regulations and their effective reinforcement.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1812.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62732919255 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23371121737 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611801242236 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.7125219854 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.2857142857 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.95238095238 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342498277431 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917750511189 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654967226803 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170849902626 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447117262796 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.78 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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